More than words created by SlyKid101 13 years ago
Plays: 72
Favorites: 16
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Genre: Classical/New Age
Mood: Sad/Melancholic
Theme: Other
Instruments:
Nice and slow
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Sep 10 2012
#101
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Excellent job! You really should keep working at it. I didn't do anything to help but put up my own songs, if you used them as inspiration then thanks, but if not, its better that way. Music is just a way of communication.
The only thing I would suggest is that you work on the transitions of the song - how one part leads to the next part. There were a few silent parts and I don't think the ending fit but overall, the emotions came through and I really like this song! :)
This one is one of your better ones but even as this being one of your good works, it's not complete. Keep trying man.
Thanks, Ill keep trying and ill take your comments and put them to good use.
One of the more connective songs on your list.. I'm really into emotion in a song, even if it's only presets, because no matter what it is it always reflects that artist and what they are feeling at the moment. A good song is not melodic or complicated, a good song is familiar and connective to its audience through things we go through in life. It's nice to see that your songs are reaching out there to the audience through what you have to say as a MS'er, and I'm glad you got onto this site =).
Yeah, Feeling is a main aspect for when im making a song, also piano but, Thanks from your helpful comments reading these is giving me an idea of what I should and should not do. But you should be taking all the credit, you, Ito and Uxinta were the ones who pointed me here ^_^
And yet, another top class. (@*)
very good music..:)
cool
Its kinda slow for me but good song :D
Nice Music!
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Not quite a slow song, but really something I enjoy! Of course, I love that piano solo you used, it's so mystic and elegant moving. Nice work. Nice changes with the piano and the drum solo in one of the parts. Nothing much I can say for this song, it's really well done. Great work Slykid! :D
Yes I did feel that it ended a bit odd, next time im going to lower it and see what happens.
Oh right I forgot one thing, the chord harmony used at the end was a little overpowering and plus it really sounds too minor, it kind of throws off the mood throughout the song. you could try to lower it. :D