Paradox created by Jakio 10 years ago
Plays: 211
Favorites: 12
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Genre: Rock/Metal
Mood: Dark/Heavy
Theme: Other
Why do i feel this pain?
It is born when i close my eyes
In my dreams i'm another man
or am i myself in disguise
I see his life, and it's leaving him
He's an honest man with two wives
one being his work, the other his love
but more dies the more i'm alive
I beginning to wonder if he sees me
If i'm the one his his dreams,
But i have a life of my own, i know
why is our realities bursting at the seams
I wake up and he's gone from my mind,
And i go on with my day
when night falls, he gets closer
i start to hearing things he will say
Atlas he sees me, but what does it mean?
Are we mentally linked,
Or are we the same person,
in two lives, we have synced
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Chart listings
Jul 06 2015
#125
Jul 13 2015
#202
Jun 15 2015
#7
Jun 22 2015
#26
Jun 29 2015
#94
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Vietnam office in Vietnam
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now this is the kinda shit i fucking like. that i FUCKING like A LOT!! !!! ! i want to hear more of this particular kinda shit, and more of this creative genius ass poems you make, beacause theyre SO. ASSFUCKING. GOOD. ah yeah. oh this is so good. oh you know why its so fucking good? not because, im fucking this song, but because THIS SONG IS FUCKING ME.
you have skills my friend
use them
now.
what are you waiting for?
LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Jeez... you're right.
that was the most profane thing i ever found on musicshake
to say that without any profanity, I dig this. Its your style, it sounds like you. somthing you would make. (Thats fucking good!) really creative what you dig with the affects. keep this shit up
you read meh new story yet?
i listened to Year 3000 a couple times and drew influences from it. that's why its longer and more complex than my more recent stuffs.
somebody is..... a little excited
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
dis DEATH METAL?
THAT FREAJKEN AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a great musical poem.
Amazing poem and song !! ♥ I like the rythm and the effects !! ^^ Five stars and keep it up !! ^^
How long did you take to make this song? Just curious. I'm wondering what the last part means (the effects)
i truly appreciate the support and time you taken to listen and comment, not alot of people do that. (favoriting the song tells me that you like it enough)
and as for the effects? well, one of the two gentlemen described in the description was on their death bed, so i'll leave the rest to your interpretation
It's a great song anyways i couldn't make a song like that in a million years
me a faaaaaaaan!
Truly impressing industrial piece of music. JAKIO !
Youre back man
(@Jaiko) You've got a point there...
If this was a zombie song, I would've challenged it myself XD
i wish your song to win all of them,
title may seem similar to zombie,
but i can guess what you mean by this.
this song is getting alot of battles, 5 so far. thats a record for me. maybe its the name... don't know. Maybe people think this is a zombie song? well its not about zombies. it has nothing to do with it. what do you think?