The Last Breath created by Lyadra 13 years ago

Plays: 132 Favorites: 27
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Genre: Classical/New Age Mood: Dark/Heavy Theme: Other

Be gentle, sky, and let me rest
These bones are worn - they lack the zest
Of flesh in life - they're marrowless!
Their arid surface, nakedness!
Betrayed in death; no sheen of red
From coursing blood; and blue was shed
Upon the fading out of eyes
That cased the world and gave disguise
To what my deepest thoughts had been
But now I'm done with all I've seen.

Mark R Slaughter


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mrmouaboi - 13 years ago

Ahhh great job at scary/mysterious/creepy song.. im not a fan of it (only because I get scared easy) but I guessed I liked it, Loved the Violin parts :D but great once again

CarpeNoctum - 13 years ago

I really love the creepier tunes of MS. This song is so atmospheric and absolutely no exception... I love it! :)

I really like that bit of poetry too.

Lyadra - 13 years ago

Thank you so much Carpe :3

FioreDeLys - 13 years ago

ಠ__ಠ┌П┐ ....*Glare*

Lyadra - 13 years ago

lol ( ̄▽ ̄。)

FioreDeLys - 13 years ago

kk....no glare , how about stare ?ಠ__ಠ

Lyadra - 13 years ago

lol... don't glare at me like that, dear ( ̄▽ ̄。) it's not my fault y'know ( ̄▽ ̄。)

Vesper - 13 years ago

This is seriously beautiful!! I will love it forever =)

Lyadra - 13 years ago

Thanks Vesper! I'm glad! :)

mysong123 - 13 years ago

Spooky song.Great job!

Lyadra - 13 years ago

Thanks mysong! :D

roughtice - 13 years ago

I served as a reference very much. beautiful.

Lyadra - 13 years ago

Thank you roughtice! :)

Kitaro - 13 years ago

Awesome!!Great new age song ..I realli like this very interesting ..Exellent weork Lyadra!!

Lyadra - 13 years ago

Thanks Kitaro! I'm glad you like it :D

lulucutipie - 13 years ago

such a great song u shold start writing songs cause this one is perfect

Lyadra - 13 years ago

Thank you :)

luana01 - 13 years ago

wow really beautiful..

Lyadra - 13 years ago

Thank you Luana :)

hopeflow - 13 years ago

Wow, kinda creepy at the begining but it went really emotional later on. Love the church bell and the string <3 There's also a touch of sadness in the song, which I find it perfect with this song. Very well done Lyadra, love it :D

Lyadra - 13 years ago

Thanks Hope! :D I'm glad you like it. Very appreciate your comment :D

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