Open Door created by marslaunch 14 years ago

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Genre: Rock/Metal
Mood: Light/Bright
Theme: Other
When I am no longer spoken for
Last exhale closes one door
and opens another
Aah, fresh air, I am the space between the stars
There it was, where we could say, here we are
Now inside I know how you are from afar
What did you want to say when those drops of rain
Glistened as they glided off your face
I thought maybe you could be thinking of me thinking of you
Aah, fresh air, I am the space between the stars
I thought of you
I wondered what you were thinking about
I thought you could be thinking of me thinking of you
Begin again
Open door
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i like your part it says "When I'm no longer spoken for, and last exhale closes one door"
cool lol I really like this one too:D
Great
I dare not sing like you
Well,the song is really god,I like it,the singing is good too,the problem is in a quality of the vocal track.First, to do this in a more pro level,you need better mic,second good voice processor and maybe mixer,and third turn down a little vocal track,when you get sound more clear,you don't need it that loud.
I want to give you a bear hug. I completely agree. I just couldn't understand any of the words turned down any lower, in time it would be nice to have a set up like that, thanks DancingBear, did you get a chance to hear Past the Ceilings? I am interested to know which one of these songs you think should be more my style. Thanks again.
interesting..
Epic win !!!
Really cool but.. vocal............. never mind.. it is epic dude ^^
Thanks so much for your comments leslie and franznar, I posted the lyrics if you care to check them out, maybe it will make sense now ;)
if i can throw some input to this conversation.. i actually do like this kinda of singing. I enjoy incoherent vocals at time because it sound like another instrument. little choppy in spots with the timing and choice of notes; but overall it's cool!
Great advice, thanks.
It's english, the lyrics will be posted in the song description soon if I don't delete this song. The lyrics to Past the Ceilings are in the song description because I know there hard to understand at times.
Try to sing with a greatly happy expression or based on your expression =D
In your lyrics what language do you use?
Not sure what you mean, restate your opinion please.
For me, you singing its a art but here my opinion =D
It's ok if you don't follow this it is just my opinion,
try singing little bit straight lyrics =D
Your music is really epic... Keep it up
Seriously I need an honest opinion on the vocals, should I never sing like that again?
haha singing in this one too XD
Is it that bad? Should I remove this one? lol
really? I didn't think it was funny
no its not that its just freaking hilarious
lol, thats what somewhat else said, not drunk, just cant hear myself when I sing I have the headphones up too loud, I know my voice isn't great, just bored and keeping myself entertained.
haha i will call it "the drunken singer"
Usually songs on the radio and vh1 all have singing in them too.
Did you repost this song?
Yeap, it's nice! :)
I just posted another, Past the Ceilings, my favorite yet, I think you'll really dig this one.
Yeah , I changed some music and deleted some vocals,I think it sounds better, what do you think?