Open Door created by marslaunch 14 years ago

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Genre: Rock/Metal Mood: Light/Bright Theme: Other

When I am no longer spoken for
Last exhale closes one door
and opens another
Aah, fresh air, I am the space between the stars
There it was, where we could say, here we are
Now inside I know how you are from afar
What did you want to say when those drops of rain
Glistened as they glided off your face
I thought maybe you could be thinking of me thinking of you
Aah, fresh air, I am the space between the stars
I thought of you
I wondered what you were thinking about
I thought you could be thinking of me thinking of you
Begin again
Open door


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julian5742 - 13 years ago

i like your part it says "When I'm no longer spoken for, and last exhale closes one door"

RenesmeeWolf - 14 years ago

cool lol I really like this one too:D

ekatotoro - 14 years ago

Great
I dare not sing like you

DancingBear - 14 years ago

Well,the song is really god,I like it,the singing is good too,the problem is in a quality of the vocal track.First, to do this in a more pro level,you need better mic,second good voice processor and maybe mixer,and third turn down a little vocal track,when you get sound more clear,you don't need it that loud.

marslaunch - 14 years ago

I want to give you a bear hug. I completely agree. I just couldn't understand any of the words turned down any lower, in time it would be nice to have a set up like that, thanks DancingBear, did you get a chance to hear Past the Ceilings? I am interested to know which one of these songs you think should be more my style. Thanks again.

lesliedoll - 14 years ago

interesting..

franznar12 - 14 years ago

Epic win !!!

franznar12 - 14 years ago

Really cool but.. vocal............. never mind.. it is epic dude ^^

marslaunch - 14 years ago

Thanks so much for your comments leslie and franznar, I posted the lyrics if you care to check them out, maybe it will make sense now ;)

lesliedoll - 14 years ago

if i can throw some input to this conversation.. i actually do like this kinda of singing. I enjoy incoherent vocals at time because it sound like another instrument. little choppy in spots with the timing and choice of notes; but overall it's cool!

marslaunch - 14 years ago

Great advice, thanks.

marslaunch - 14 years ago

It's english, the lyrics will be posted in the song description soon if I don't delete this song. The lyrics to Past the Ceilings are in the song description because I know there hard to understand at times.

franznar12 - 14 years ago

Try to sing with a greatly happy expression or based on your expression =D

franznar12 - 14 years ago

In your lyrics what language do you use?

marslaunch - 14 years ago

Not sure what you mean, restate your opinion please.

franznar12 - 14 years ago

For me, you singing its a art but here my opinion =D
It's ok if you don't follow this it is just my opinion,
try singing little bit straight lyrics =D

Your music is really epic... Keep it up

marslaunch - 14 years ago

Seriously I need an honest opinion on the vocals, should I never sing like that again?

shadowknight - 14 years ago

haha singing in this one too XD

marslaunch - 14 years ago

Is it that bad? Should I remove this one? lol

marslaunch - 14 years ago

really? I didn't think it was funny

shadowknight - 14 years ago

no its not that its just freaking hilarious

marslaunch - 14 years ago

lol, thats what somewhat else said, not drunk, just cant hear myself when I sing I have the headphones up too loud, I know my voice isn't great, just bored and keeping myself entertained.

shadowknight - 14 years ago

haha i will call it "the drunken singer"

marslaunch - 14 years ago

Usually songs on the radio and vh1 all have singing in them too.

Chronos - 14 years ago

Did you repost this song?

Chronos - 14 years ago

Yeap, it's nice! :)

marslaunch - 14 years ago

I just posted another, Past the Ceilings, my favorite yet, I think you'll really dig this one.

marslaunch - 14 years ago

Yeah , I changed some music and deleted some vocals,I think it sounds better, what do you think?

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