58 created by jkrjjrs 18 years ago

yeah !! dev dev woo youo rock, yeah!!!

Great job on your first song!

The song had a good beat goin. There are a few things that you should take into consideration for future songs though.
(1) Intro- this song really doesn't have much of an intro. It sounds good, but a more extensive intro will greatly improve song quality.
(2) Variety- the instruments you chose sounded great. But there weren't very many of them. The more, the better. (most of the time anyway...lol)
(3) Redundancy- because you used the same intrument over and over, the song became very repetitve. It is usually a good idea to have a "primary" and a "secondary" instrument. It keeps the flow without sounding redundant.
(4) Volume control- you didn't really have any issues with volume control in this song. So, good job! Volume control is very important. Always be mindful of it.
(5) Ending- the ending on this one was rather abrupt. Try to slow/calm the song down a little bit before you just end it.

I know looking at all of this may make you feel like you did horrible on this song. If it does, your wrong. You did a great job! Many of those things I just mentioned will improve with experience. I think this was a great first effort! Welcome to MS, and keep pumpin' out good songs!

-CV

tnks just wanted some techno relax

Awesome Devin. I love this song. haha.

*bops head up 'n down* Nice tune! I really love the bass beats. *Thumbs Up*
Please check out my song, Night of Fear, and rate! :D