what will make you stay created by CH0PSTICKG1RL 17 years ago

Plays: 49 Favorites: 0
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Genre: R&B Mood: Longing/Anticipating Theme: Other
Instruments:

did this pretty quickly so don't wonder why it's not that good.

however plz rate or comment coz it's my first rb track and acutally it's not really my genre...

wason request ;)


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CVines08 - 17 years ago

Would you mind checking out my masterpiece that I just recently posted? It is really long, so make sure you have the time to listen to it. Lol. It is called "The Evolution of Music". I am sorry if asking you to listen to this is kinda rude since I didn't say much about your song, but I am kinda in a hurry. I am sure you know that I don't usually do it this way. Thanks for listening to it and sorry for any inconvenience I may have caused you. =D

-CV

Shin-NJ - 17 years ago

Aside from that wah guitar it sounds pretty good. The acoustic guitar was a good choice.

CVines08 - 17 years ago

Eh, it wasn't too bad. I can tell that it is not your genre though. LOL!

The guitar is RARELY a good intrument for this genre. Unless you can find just the right guitar, just the right chord, and just the right vocals. If you are willing to try another one, use the piano as your main instrument. If not, well, keep putting out the good stuff!

Thanks for taking my request!

-CV

ShKahh - 17 years ago

honesty.. I think this is a hit and miss.. It starts off okay, but then it just seems to drag along. It was a great attempt though.

CH0PSTICKG1RL - 17 years ago

uhhh... i start to dislike it myself.... so random... i should stick to other genres...