This is better. on the vocal part, try adding a couple of instruments like drum, bass & another instrument of your choice that has the tempo to match the beat and vocal. like you have at 5:44-6:02. a vocal would have been good in there. still, you are getting a lot better.
most unfitting picture possible, but who am I to judge? I guess the song is about loving others lol.
thanks
@_@ WTF IS THAT?!
lol
This is better. on the vocal part, try adding a couple of instruments like drum, bass & another instrument of your choice that has the tempo to match the beat and vocal. like you have at 5:44-6:02. a vocal would have been good in there. still, you are getting a lot better.