Brood Season created by Thienien 8 years ago
The Pain some are forced to endure with a silent scream feels as injustice. Would you drown with us in the sea of life as our bodies begin to disappear? There is balance to everything, but why does it seem it is only winter and no spring in our souls? The first half may be darkness, then light. Some of us were chosen for the light of bliss at birth then the bite of darkness at the end.
Yin and Yang. There is always a balance.
This song is a balance of a Brooding Ominous decent and Blissful joy blending together in a Chaotic but serene-calming Melody; not giving one's soul the portion of Peace or the craving for the escape from the danger descending as we speak.
*This song was originally dubbed Torture Season.**
*Ear Rape at 8:04-05* - my apologies
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The poem is very deep and beautiful.I agree with 89Ford, you need to make the vocal part more audible.You are very good with the concept for a song and as an instrumentalist,take care of the vocal part,it does need adjustment,make it louder,fuller, varied, less timid.Great song overall.
Lol thanks :)) Yeah I'll work on that :)
Nice work! =) ur off beat but the lyrics are good.
sure hear my song. Little Braiden. lol I'm still a noob.
Okay cool thanks :)
I think a intro that starts the song without singing, let the song start, then start singing on the second bar, you're not bad, just need some encouragement and a second set of ears to help you out. I think if you take out the 4 dimensional warm pad at the 4th bar, and add maybe a different warm pad in the 5th bar to take it's place, we might get to hear more of your voice.
Lol but thanks about the lyrics
I am? lol