Get up and drink with life created by STiLLz 17 years ago

Sweet I love the entrance of the electric guitar. Well the first instrument that pops out after the initial drums, not sure if it's an electric guitar or bass. Overall I don't have many criticisms, it's a very nice song.
Here are my suggestions for the future though
-You had a very strong beginning but at 00:27 you went into a bridge too quickly.
-Again, beginning is strong but middle and ending needs a bit more spice
-It seems to me the bass is the main factor of the song. Pump it up louder. This can be done by adding another track of the same instrument to make it louder.
-Play around with the music effects, like nomalize or reverb.

This song is really nice. It's really great :D

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