Heartbroken created by rtctdg2000 15 years ago

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Genre: R&B Mood: Sad/Melancholic Theme: Other

This is my second attempt in making a Vocals song. my first one ended in failure but i will redeem that first song later on, Hopefully u like this song :D. i liked the vocal voice it was real cool to work with. (person thats new at looking at all the vocals)

Lemee know what you think.
comments and opinions are much needed, thanks.


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hosuyoon - 15 years ago

great mix, vocal sounds a little ackward but music is great

rtctdg2000 - 15 years ago

yea they pretty corny.. but if u put it right with music sometimes it dont sound as corny. lol

silverhok77 - 15 years ago

Haha. She musta done somethin' pretty bad. Cool song dude. I've tried vocals, but I can't even get over how corny so many of the lyrics are. :DDD

rtctdg2000 - 15 years ago

haha thanks Karma! and wouldnt he be mad? its not said in the song. but its obvious she did something wrong that broke his heart. and yes its simple but took me a while to make it as simple LOL

karma5 - 15 years ago

well, he seems a bit angry, doesnt he? =P

a simple, clean arrangement
u did well; nicely done rtc!

= )

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