Ting Tin Ting - TSR created by Gilgamesh 12 years ago
Plays: 27
Favorites: 3
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Genre: Rock/Metal
Mood: Love/Romantic
Theme: Other
Instruments:
I tried to put everything in this........ hope u guyz like it............
The poem is very deep and beautiful.I agree with 89Ford, you need to make the vocal part more audible.You are very good with the concept for a song and as an instrumentalist,take care of the vocal part,it does need adjustment,make it louder,fuller, varied, less timid.Great song overall.
Lol thanks :)) Yeah I'll work on that :)
Nice work! =) ur off beat but the lyrics are good.
sure hear my song. Little Braiden. lol I'm still a noob.
Okay cool thanks :)
I think a intro that starts the song without singing, let the song start, then start singing on the second bar, you're not bad, just need some encouragement and a second set of ears to help you out. I think if you take out the 4 dimensional warm pad at the 4th bar, and add maybe a different warm pad in the 5th bar to take it's place, we might get to hear more of your voice.
Lol but thanks about the lyrics
I am? lol