Distant Winter! vs Children Of Eden finished December 21st

Flashstar95 challenged syntonia 14 years ago Votes: 0 Views: 1,237

Winner: Children Of Eden by syntonia

Head to head song stats
Distant Winter!
Song title
Children Of Eden
Flashstar95
Created by
syntonia
3:39
Song length
3:53
Soul/Funk/Groove
Genre
Ballad
Light/Bright
Mood
Love/Romantic
Christmas
Theme
Christmas
38
Plays
128
1
Ratings
14
2
Comments
14
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Sorena2009 - 14 years ago

The poem is very deep and beautiful.I agree with 89Ford, you need to make the vocal part more audible.You are very good with the concept for a song and as an instrumentalist,take care of the vocal part,it does need adjustment,make it louder,fuller, varied, less timid.Great song overall.

RenesmeeWolf - 14 years ago

Lol thanks :)) Yeah I'll work on that :)

89Ford - 14 years ago

Nice work! =) ur off beat but the lyrics are good.

89Ford - 14 years ago

sure hear my song. Little Braiden. lol I'm still a noob.

RenesmeeWolf - 14 years ago

Okay cool thanks :)

89Ford - 14 years ago

I think a intro that starts the song without singing, let the song start, then start singing on the second bar, you're not bad, just need some encouragement and a second set of ears to help you out. I think if you take out the 4 dimensional warm pad at the 4th bar, and add maybe a different warm pad in the 5th bar to take it's place, we might get to hear more of your voice.

RenesmeeWolf - 14 years ago

Lol but thanks about the lyrics

RenesmeeWolf - 14 years ago

I am? lol